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Review:AquariaJasmyne says:
Hey Lily! :)

*is totally blown away* Wow. That was...wow. I don't think I've ever read something like this before;something so beautiful and thought provoking and unique. Bill and Fleur are characters that I've never really read much of, so I really have nothing to go on, but either way - simply amazing, amazing piece of writing you have here.

I'm really not one for all the hype and OTT-ness that encompasses Valentines' Day, which I think made me adore this story even more. It was just so...simple, and elegant, in a way, that instead of giving each other flowers, they gave another couple flowers.

You really fleshed out Fleur's character. Like I mentioned, I haven't read much of her, but I'm so glad that she's not one of those stuck-up Veela; she actually thinks about others for who they are and not what they look like. Really, she just brought a smile to my face - by the end I just felt like crying happily! :')

Apparation...wow. You've made it seem like a character in itself! The way Fleur thought about it was brilliant, and really made me think about what apparation actually is. You described it so beautifully! :D

Lily, this was just incredible. Everything was just so beautiful, you described everything brilliantly and softly - I'm speechless, I really am. 10/10 from me, and I simply have to favourite, haha! Amazing work, hun! *hugs*

♥ Lizzie

Author's Response: hi lizzie!
i'm not sure that i can fully respond to this review because it is so nice and lovely and kind, more than, maybe, i think i deserve...
but thank you, so much, for reviewing this piece. i look back on it now, and although it hasn't been long at all since i wrote it, i still see things that i can't be satisfied with--some of the things that here, you mentioned that you really liked. it makes me feel better, like any writer i think, to know that things that i do are not--i'm not sure how to phrase it differently--horrible or something similar...but that people actually appreciate them.
thank you so much, again *hugs*

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