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Review:Dalek194 says:
Another good chapter. Though it is quite short and not much happens, it's always good to not rush into action and miss out everything else, and this chapter sets the scene well. The calm before the storm, as such...

Good work on the glimpse of Snape's personality you give us; it reminds us that he's both still the same sneering man he was, but he's also still on our side. That is to say, the Carrows annoy him just as much as students do. The point I was trying to make in the last review was that though he is on the right side, Snape a) had to keep his cover up, so probably wouldn't be so welcoming and b) even if he is on our side, it doesn't mean he's neccesarily nice to everyone - he'll be the same as he was before. I will keep reading to work out what you meant in the response ;-)

Overall, a good chapter with good description and realistic characters. I am really enjoying this so far, keep up the good work! :-)

Author's Response: Thanks once more for both reading and reviewing!

I found this chapter to be all filler, it just carries along to the next chapter, but doesn't split nicely to the end of ch1 and the beginning of ch3!

Snape's been so hard to write, it's unbelievable, whenever my muse abandons me you can gurantee there's something of Snape's to write next! I think as I get further through the story I seem to get him more on the nose, but it's a work in progress!

I'm glad to hear you're enjoying and look forward to reading more of your reviews in the future!


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