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Review:Dalek194 says:
Nice fic ;-) It was really enjoyable to read, and despite it's shortness you got the message across well. I feel very sorry for poor Harry, but wonder why he didn't tell her he loved her in the first place...

I like you're writing style, it engages the reader (e.g. He tried, and tried, and tried, and…you guessed it…tried) with humour, while the story is still about heartbreak and pulls it off. The grammar is mostly good, though I spotted one small mistake;

- "he decided to write Ginny " (should be "he decided to write to Ginny")

Also at the beginning it says that he already writes to Ginny but later on it gives the impression that she is angry with him so he doesn't usually write to her.

Aside from that, this was a very good fic about heartbreak and possible redemption... any chance of a sequel? Nice work.

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