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Review:Dalek194 says:
Excellent start! You've got the entire atmosphere and feel of after the battle perfect, and it's refreshing to see an After the Battle fic that starts differently. It may have been short, but I think it works better that way in this case, and it's just generally a joy to read. You really portray the characters well and the twist, with Teddy being left in Harry's care, is very well handled, and I can't wait for the nexy chapter!

The grammar is almost perfect, which adds a lot to the story's flow. I only spotted one tiny thing;

- "Oh not, itís not a problem" (the first not should be no)

But aside from that, this is a very promising and enjoyable start to the story; I can't wait to read more and how you handle Harry and Ginny's relationship ;-) Nice work.

Author's Response: Thank you! Sorry about the spelling thing, I write a lot of chapters at night and my brain's a bit dead by that point! Thanks for the feedback! :)

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