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Review:Dalek194 says:
Good start! I've always felt intriuged about what happened at Hogwarts when the Golden Trio were off on their adventures (I suppose you could call Ginny, Neville and Luna the Silver trio LOL. Thinking about it, there are lots of trios in HP; Dumbledore, McGonagall and Snape, then Ernie, Hannah and Justin... sorry, off topic LOL) and this story looks like it is going to be an excellent account of that.

The one thing I would point out is that the return to Hogwarts all seems very... normal. What Snape says is pretty much the same as Dumbledore used to say but with less random moments, yet Snape speaks very differently to Dumbledore - I can't imagine Snape saying "enjoy the feast" without an air of sarcasm or sneering. Also, in the compartment, all three of them seem very relaxed considering what has happened since the Ministry has fallen.

Aside from that, though, it was very good. I like your writing style; it is easy and enjoyable to read, and I can't wait to read more! Yay, I just noticed - I get to be the 50th review! It is testament to your great work that you have recieved so many, so great work! Keep it up ;-)

Author's Response: Firstly, welcome to the story :)
Secondly, thankyou for taking time to both read and review, I really do love to find unanswered reviews when I log in!

I appreciate what you're saying about it being very normal. I think, on reflection (I wrote the first chapter about a week after the release of DH) that I am a little kind to Snape, but I have tried to correct that, or at least explain it better throughout the story. If I explain too much here it will spoil the rest of the chapters, but as a hint, all I can do is point you to the memories Harry receives from Snape in the final parts of DH! Hopefully this will explain itself lol!

Anyway, enough of my ramblings, many thanks for your review, I'm very glad you like my style and congratulations on being the 50th review!

Hope to hear from you soon on another chapter!
Thanks again,
Lily

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