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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hello! :D

Oh, I really loved your second chapter! I really enjoyed reading it, and I think it's great! :D Your writing was just as good, and I loved the development in the plot and also how we get to see more of Dominique.

So I loved the flashback of James' party. That really did give us a deeper insight into the characterisation of Dom, and though I'm not sure whether I LIKE her, she is certainly becoming a more realistic person.

I really like the idea of Summerbee House, and I'm curious to see where you're going to take it next! So I'm looking forward to chapter 3! :)

Great writing, and a great story so far :) Update soon please :P

Author's Response: Honestly, I'm not too sure if I like Dom all the time either :) She's an opinionated girl for sure, and she can be fun to write. I'm glad she seems realistic, since that was my goal... after all, no one is perfect! ;) (and she certainly isn't)
And chapter 3 is in the works! Thank you so much for reviewing!

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