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Review:TheProphecy says:
Hello!

Obviously I'm doing the challenge so I've managed to finis this! yay! Congrats on completing all 51 chapters! So Obviously I might as well give you a review anyways.

I quite enjoyed it, the plot was fairly good. Some of that characters felt slightly OOC every now and again. I think my biggest issue was the detail, we barely ever had enough detail in the way they do things, what things looked like etc which really would've bulked out your chapters a bit more.

But other then that I quite enjoyed this! It had plot, Drama etc and was a very nice story. Well done! :)

Hannah x

Author's Response: Thank you for your review Hannah.

I took the Jane Austen style of writing and left most of the descriptions and picturing up to my dear readers. I mean do you really need to know the exact type of wood the table in the scene is made of? (If yes, then it is mahogany!)

I get what you mean and I will make more of an effort to set the scene for you.

Also thank you for noticing that I did really try to keep the characters real to themselves and that with my plot I wanted to create a real, slowly built up, long lasting love between them.

Love Pepper

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