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Review:silverstarletworld89 says:
HOW COULD YOU LEAVE IT THERE!?!!? (this is what I was shouting to myself!) It is like when one of your favourite programmes leave you with an epic cliffhanger and then they say 'tune in next week'. I can't wait until next week, I need to know what happens, I am so INTRIGUED!!!

The flow of your words and the descriptions that you used to described Teddy were absolutely flawless. I could really sense his pain and anguish. Also I am so curious about Victorie and how her and Teddy's relationship works. This story seems to have gone a very different way from the usual Teddy/Victorie stories, which I LOVE!! So I am very interested of how things are going to come into play.

I enjoyed how you showed us Teddy's transformation as well as told us, I think it made this story even more powerful. Also these lines really stuck out to me.

'I was your pet.

You will look like me too, soon, I hope. You will be beautiful.'

It made me stop and think, and wonder what Teddy is planning to do. Overall is was a fabulous story!! And even though, I wished that you carried on with more because I can't handle cliffhangers, It was the perfect place to end this chapter.

Silverstarletworld =)

Author's Response: SSW89

Haha, I suppose it is a bit of a cliffhanger. The next chapter is in the queue, so do not fear about knowing what happens next - actually you don't find out about that in the next chapter, I'm just teasing... it's all very ambiguous and flowery and that. You don't really find out ever.

And now I'm not making sense.

You're too kind. No really, far far too kind. I was a little scared about posting this. It's very different to everything I've ever written: the writing and the plot are so closely intertwined that I felt huge pressure about word choice, sentence structure, even formatting and paragraphs. It's very dark, and Teddy's a bit crazy, so I wanted my writing to reflect that. It is very different to all the fluffy TedVics out there.

I'm glad you like those lines! I thought 'I was your pet' was bit too childish, too simple, so I'm really happy you thought it was effective.

The other one is a little clue to what happens at the end!

Thanks so much for your kind comments and for reading and reviewing!

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