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Review:maskedmuggle says:
Hello :)

Wow. This story is just amazing! Honestly, I think that the way you've written it is completely, just wow. The words, and sentences you used… really created a intriguing plot and character and has made me especially curious to find out what your next chapter is going to bring!

I loved how there's some mystery throughout the whole chapter. I have to say this is a really unique story, and I haven't yet read one quite like this.

Really well written story, utterly engaging, and I hope to see the next chapter soon :)

Author's Response: Hello back :)

Thank you so much for your kind comments! I was really worried about posting this story: it's so completely different from anything I've ever written. Usually I focus more on the plot and, even though I think it's important that the story is well written, writing style usually takes second place. I wanted to try something different. In this story, the plot and writing are so closely interwoven, because I wanted to make Teddy's narration as realistic as possible. It's a lot short, choppy sentences because the rhythm flows wells with the way he's running, and he's obvo thinking of Victoire, so there's some flashbacks/memories thrown in as well.

Yes! There's lots of mystery... and lots of ambiguity. A little too much, I think!

Thanks for your review!

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