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Review:TenthWeasley says:
Well, I must begin by saying that this absolutely deserved to win its challenge - this was VERY well written, and what is more, it was just enjoyable to read. :) You have a very nice and easy writing style that doesn't cause the story to feel forced, but instead it flows seamlessly. I love it when authors can do this.

This seems so in-canon as to almost be exactly what happened (if THAT made any sense!). I can see this flowing so well with the events as we know them. Moreover, Ron is very in character, and I feel that is sometimes difficult to do, because most people just see Ron as a jokester. But his emotions and internal monologuing were all spot-on, and that impressed me a lot. My favorite bit:

"What was Ron? Comedic value? The tag-along, hoping to do something cool to be like Harry or to impress Hermione? No. He was the disappointment."

That made my heart twinge. (Also - you ended the story at a perfect place, I thought. Really well done!)

No grammar, spelling, or punctuation mistakes spotted. :D This was a really great piece! I am so glad it won, it truly deserves it. :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! It was such a lovely surprise to win :)

I've never written Ron before, so it definitely did feel challenging for me to delve into his character a little more than I usually would. I also hoped it would come across as realistic, that was my main aim when I started writing. I didn't want something that was ok, but not plausible.

I'm glad you mentioned the ending actually. I always write really angsty pieces with rather sad endings. This is the first one-shot I've ever written that still had a sense of positivity at the end. That's why I called it Voice of Hope, I aimed for it to end on a more hopeful note.

Aw, you're too kind! Thank you so much for such a lovely review :)

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