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Review:Dark Whisper says:
Heir... I loved their fight... not that they fought... but I found it to be very realistic. Great job depicting his anger and him smashing things. I could totally see it happening!

My favorite line... "...feathers from the cushions filled the room like fog and fell down like snow."

That is a wonderfully descriptive line... and I think you should do this more often, as it is perfect imagery in this scene. It is a wonderful detail that I absolutely loved. MORE!

I loved Narcissa's motherly advice and was pleasantly surprised by Goyle's visit warning him about the others.

I thought it a bit odd that he had the ring while they had the fight and was shocked that she was pregnant and hadn't told him yet. So that was a bit abrupt... other than that... I thought it was great... I LOVED the beginning fight... I have to say that was my favorite part... very realistic!

Thanks so much for posting!

Dark Whisper

Author's Response: Thank you!

He kept the ring in his pocket because they had been fighting so much that he was wondering whether or not marrying her was the best thing to do.

She had only known for a couple of days. Would you want to tell someone you're pregnant while you were fighting? Lol.


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