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Review:SearchingForLuna says:
Oh gosh... That was so sad :'(

I came so close to crying there. You really portrayed the fear and anger so well, especially with Bellatrix and the Death Eaters. I like how Alice was fearless--it made me root for her even more. But a story like this doesn't have a happy ending...

The contrast at the end, with Augusta being cheerful for a second and then seeing the horror, really drove it home.

I don't really think there's a lot of constructive criticism for this... *searches around* Umm... a couple of very very teeny grammar mistakes, if you really look... ;)

This was really haunting. I can't stop thinking about it now.

Wonderful story! Going to go stalk the rest of your author page now.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review!!
It really made my day.
I really wanted to make the reader really feel what Alice was going through, to have them read this and become emotional. I'm glad its worked. It was really hard to write, I've only ever written happy stories. I'm glad that you think I've written it well, it means a lot.


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