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Review:baletgir says:
Wow, that was sooo sweet and sad :( I had a feeling early on that she was at his grave. This was a really interesting view to see. What one misses by joining the Wizarding World, so many great possibilities that Muggles have created, but Wizards must leave them behind.

I felt as if this would make more sense if it were Rose instead of Lily. I just don't see Harry being this disappointed in his daughter, I cannot see him pushing her to this point. And (unfortunately) I can imagine Ron doing so with his daughter. That was the only bit that made it difficult for me to really believe, but otherwise I think this was a great piece! I would love to see a prequel about her sneaking off to dance class during the holidays. That could be really different and interesting. Also I'm wondering if she gave up magic completely when she joined the dance company. Obviously she would only be able to use it sparingly at most, but did she even bring a wand? And has she kept in contact with any family at all? Did she just cut her dad out, or the entire Weasley/Potter clan?
Great job!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. I do agree with you that Ron is more like to put pressure on Rose than Harry is of Lily, but I really wanted it to be Lily. She has the older brothers so it fits better with the idea. The pressure though can be more in her head than actually applied by Harry.

There is a whole back story I could make for this story. I don't have any plans right now to write it, but it is definitely something I could look at one day.

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