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Review:Violet Gryfindor says:
It was great to see another part to this story. I had not thought it would be more than a one-shot, so it was a very pleasant surprise - any excuse to read more of your poetic style. ^_^ And this chapter did not disappoint.

I like what you're doing with the snapshots into their relationship, and you build nicely off the previous part, showing how things have changed, particularly for Teddy. My favourite lines were in the beginning, though, in the way you set the scene with those images of the clifftop and the waves crashing beneath. It was a violent backdrop for their "silent friendship", but I think it reflects Rose's thoughts and emotions, reflecting her continued desire to flee, but this time, she can't - she's at the edge of a cliff, the edge of her future. Beautiful!

Fantastic work! I look forward to seeing more of this story as you go. You write Teddy/Rose so well1 ^_^

Author's Response: I'm determined to prove to myself that I can write something other than a one-shot, I have an unhealthy addiction to them XD
My favourite bit is the beginning too, I actually had some trouble finishing it off from there. I'm a sucker for violent weather and cliff scenes, I can't seem to help myself. I'm glad you think it fits in with Rose's emotions, and her life at this point.
Pfft, and I don't write Teddy/Rose half as well as you! Your gorgeous 'The Touch of Someone New' still trumps all others in my mind :)
Thank you so much for the lovely review! You really are too kind -hugs-


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