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Review:SeverusSnape15 says:
Sev here with your review: :D The end of this one is really cute. I love it to bits!!! There are a few errors here and there, but you're getting there. I'd say to include a bit more dialogue, but that's just me. Some people like stories with less dialogue and more details!

Some parts were a bit confusing. I got confused on who was speaking at what times, so you might want to go back and specify on that with anything. "Victoire said" or "Teddy stated" etc.

Other than that, I see nothing wrong. I love it.

Author's Response: Aww thanks! personally i dont like a lot of dialogue, bit ill keep in mind if/when i edit!

oops, ill definately have a look at that! thanks so much and im glad you liked.

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