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Review:SearchingForLuna says:
Awwwh! That was so sad.

I like how you made Rose utterly imperfect. She's vain, she wasn't always beautiful, she has a temper... it just made her so much more well-rounded.

Her memories are sweet too, very fleshed out. I can almost remember them with her.

Be careful about the tenses, I think you switched from present to past tense while telling about current-day Rose after describing her memories :P

I really like your characterization of Scorpius! Many people portray him as a sensitive good guy; I'm glad you didn't, just because of the new perspective it gives me.

Overall, very good story so far! It left me thinking, which is all I can ask :)

Author's Response: Thank you ever so much for the review!! Eek yes, I will certainly watch out of those tenses. I will make sure to re-send it to my beta =). Ha Ha yes, I thought that I would show Scorpius a little bit differently. I am glad that it left you wondering, thanks again =)!!

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