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Review:electricfeel says:
Hi electricfeel here with your review.

Wow, what a cliffhanger! This was a very short, sharp chapter that grabbed my attention from the very first sentence. It's an interesting premise, to throw two enemies back together after so many years. I especially like how you have Draco, who is probably a more proud character than Harry, being the one asking for help.

Yet, despite the seriousness within this story, there were still a few moments that had me smiling. The lines after Draco asks for help especially. I can see that you're mixing humour throughout your writing and although this is a short snippet of things to come, I think it works.

One thing I would say, however, is that it is short. Personally, I think it works to set up your story, but I wouldn't advise it in following chapters.

That being said, I did enjoy this. It's an interesting premise like I said, and it has certainly piqued my interest. Feel free to request again :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I was really skeptical about the chapter because I haven't written in a while, so thank you for the input. I'm glad you liked the premise, the bits of humor and I will try and make the future chapters longer to include more. Thanks again. :)

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