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Review:ilikeit says:
I like it so far, just started it though. Theres some spacing issues though and switching perspectives a lot..which is kind of confusing. Also you wrote as Sirius saying "I" even though I'm pretty sure it's not from her perspective. It's a good idea and I feel like if you re-wrote it a little (maybe switch between McKennas view and then someone in the Marauders group plus Lily Evans) it would be even better.

Author's Response: Okay, i am thinking about re-writing it and getting someone to proof read it first, I will work on my spacing. When you post it spaces alot. Sorry but i'm glad you like it(:

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