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Review:Snapdragons says:
Wow. This was a fascinating, beautiful, and slightly terrifying look at Teddy. A lot of times we see the werewolf nature of him pushed to the side and forgotten, but his father was full werewolf, and it's not a stretch of the imagination to assume that Teddy will have many of the same characteristics too.

Teddy and Victoire seem to come from very different worlds here. "I hated you then, for a moment, before you smiled at me." Victoire is surrounded by family and love, and it seems that Teddy feels much more like an outsider.

Your word choice is skilled and masterfully used to create a haunting setting that gave me chills. The dark, star-ridden night washing over them, clouds rolling dangerously overhead, the embrace of the concrete. It's all done so well and really creates the mood of the piece.

It is a bit frightening - I think everything is, really, when dealing with a narrator who's a bit out of control. But still, I found Teddy not only intriguing but compelling to read about and couldn't help but feel a little scared for Victoire.

A beautiful one-shot. Congratulations - you did a fantastic job! :)

Author's Response: I really wanted to write something completely different. All my other stories are very plot-based, and the way I write them are very uniform. This however, is very new. Very angsty, very flowery, very ambiguous.

I like werewolves. I originality wanted to write the fic about Remus and Tonks, but I never thought that Tonks would be able to possess the cold quality that Victoire had that would cause Teddy to be in love/fight for her. And Teddy is an orphan, and an outsider. Half werewolf.

Thank you so much for your wonderful comments! They really make me want to write. I have actually managed to finish this story due to inspiration from the lovely reviews I get. ♥ I love to try something different.

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing! It made my day!

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