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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
This is such an interesting one-shot. I really, really like it. Your characerisation of Molly is just spot-on. I don't think it's random that you chose Molly as your first MC. You did a wonderful job with her, you clearly know her well (well, as well as you can know a fictional character).

Your writing style has wonderful potential. You've got good sentence structure, and I particularly like your imagery and your use of metaphors and similes. Your description of Bellatrix - especially likening her to Medusa - is incredible.

It is a short one-shot, and though I would have liked to see perhaps more build up and more of Molly's emotions, I think it works. It paints a picture of just one moment in time, and it is a beautiful picture.

Well done.

Author's Response: Wow thanks! :*) I'm thinking about adding the last bit of the battle scene to it but also don't want to ruin what I've already put down.

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