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Review:Yoshi_Kitten says:
Ok, wow, I said I wanted more detail about the school and you certainly did deliver in that department, lol! Well done!! I love that you went back and took a little bit of extra time to paint a more clear picture of what Dunamase looks like in the reader's mind. The school feels really homey, and I like it a lot. It's no wonder poor Jayde didn't ever want to leave there. :(

I still cracked up at the Irish spat between Ron and Hermione, lol. That is so like Ron. Oh, and Idk if I mentioned this before, but I also love it how she keeps calling Ron "Ronald" in her head, lol. I would love to hear her call him Ronald out loud, because Mrs. Weasley is the only other one who ever calls him that, haha! :p

Your line spacing and paragraph format has greatly improved, which makes the overall flow much, much better now. You are improving hun, and I still love this story so much! Jayde is so unique and original. You are doing a fabulous job my dear, keep it up!! =)

Author's Response: Haha, now I see what you mean about the mix-up! It's totally okay though sweetie, whichever chapter the reviews are for, they're still amazing and I LOVE YOU for them! *hugs*

I'm so glad you liked the more detail about Dunamase; I did that JUST FOR YOU! I'm glad it came across as 'homey' too, that's what I was aiming for; a small little school that's quite a bit different from Hogwarts.

I'm so glad that you get the whole Irish arguement; FINALLY someone gets my dry, sarcastic humor, lol! Haha, I was going for that whole "new person, call them what they're introduced to you as" thing with her calling Ron "Ronald" in her head; I didn't realize until just now that I didn't show her calling him Ronald out loud, haha!

I'm SO glad I took your advice and took the time to go back and edit these chapters; for the line spacing, description, and everything else. Again, thank you SO MUCH! *hugs*

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