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Review:AquariaJasmyne says:
JANE~ ♥

Oh, this is for Shelby's challenge! Yay! Bellatrix is a very fun character to write, trust me, hehe. ;)

For a first time at writing dear old Bella, you did a good job! You've captured her general Black-ness very well indeed. Her arrogance and pride really shone through, as well. The mention of Andromeda was just perfect! :D

Narcissa's innocence and naive nature was brilliant. You've characterised her just as how I've always imagined her - just a little doll in a world of pretty dresses and society with the romantic flair. Also, the way Narcissa was confused by the Dark Lord was done incredibly well.

As someone who has written about the Black sisters a fair bit, I have to commend you for giving them a go - they are such unappreciated characters and yet you have written them very in character and made them memorable in their own way. So you have done a really, really good job, my love, 'twas brilliant! YAY FOR JANE AND HER EPIC SKILLS! *hugs*

-Lizzie xx

Author's Response: Lizzie-Claire! Please forgive the lateness of this response, I really am truly grateful you read this over for me. ^^ I am sosososo glad you liked it! Bella and Cissy were fun to write, and I'm glad I got the chance to. :)

LOVER YOU!!! *squish* Thank you for doing this for me!


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