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Review:TallestTower says:
Aw shucks, thanks for mentioning me ♥
FIRST REVIEW. (Hopefully, unless Annie beats me, then I shall throw shoes at her.)

I adore the chapter title. It's very Don Pearson actually.
This is a very interesting first chapter, and a nice framework around Lucy's story. The fact that she is telling the readers the story, whilst trying to plead her innocence is very interesting.

I love the dialogue in this, and the tension.
I think the story has the potential to be amazing, and I'm really interested to see the characterizations. Already, I'm intrigued about Harvey and Lucy. I especially like how you chose to use Lucy- this is a bit of a general statement, but a lot of the time she can be written off, because she's Percy's daughter, and Lucy is a sweet name, so to have her in this situation is very clever and refreshing.

Really like the title too, very excited about this story! xx

Author's Response: Baww, you deserved the mention. You guys have all been super helpful. And poor Annie. o_O

I'm glad you like the chapter title. It was very spur of the moment. I realized last second that I didnt have one, haha.

You are so lovely for leaving me this review, Helena! I'm glad there's so much intrigue for Harvey and Lucy. And yeah, I thought using Lucy might be interesting. She doesn't get written a lot, and there's really no reason why she shouldn't be.


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