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Review:Mintleaf says:
Hmm so I see what you meant by the writing being a little slow, but I hardly think it's much of a deterrent at all as the plot is so fascinating :) I was ever so frightened for little baby Emma when Mortimer cast that spell on her (well before we knew what the curse was). I do however think it's unbelievable OOC for Moody to have justified Mort's killing in any way. Especially seeing as he was clearly a fan of purebloodedness, Moody probably would have been suspicious of him already. When you first described Lyra I thought she was going to be a young McGonagall, haha!

Anyway, this was an interesting prologue! :)

Author's Response: Thank you for the kind words! It's always a shocker when people come in to read and review this story, but it's great to hear that you've enjoyed the first chapter and felt for the characters.

My writing of Moody here is suspect, and I can only blame the age of this story and its author for that. I figured out how to write him better in my later stories. ;)

If you do continue, I hope you enjoy what you find. :)

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