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Review:electricfeel says:
Hi BrightStar, electricfeel here with your review finally. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to get to this, I can only apologise profusely!

This was a cute story. I really liked the structure of it. The way each story linked to the next was cleverly done. I was also pleasantly surprised that you explored the different forms love can take, it wasn't all romantic relationships. This was a really lovely aspect of this story and helped make it a little unique.

I also liked how, despite only writing a few paragraphs on each character, you managed to exhibit the characters personality. As you know, I'm not huge on next-gen characters but as a reader I could see the youth in Dominique, the spoiltness of Victoire etc. It's really good writing.

The different storylines themselves were done well too. My favourite was probably Gabrielle. She's rarely ever explored as a character and I love how you made her life so imperfect despite her obvious perfections. It was so unusual to see this and I really, really liked that.

I think as a writer, you obviously have great potential. It seems to me that continuing to write will only refine the skills you already possess. Again, I am so sorry regarding the long wait and I can only hope this review made up for it!

Author's Response: Hi! No worries about the delay, it was worth the wait to get this review. It's made me so, so hapy - especially your view that I have potential!

So glad you liked the story, despite the next gen parts. I was nervous about the structure, and about Gabrielle as a character, I was so very happy both worked!

Thanks so much! :D

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