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Review:electricfeel says:
Hi electricfeel here back for another review. I am so, so sorry that its taken me a whole month to get to this! I have never left my review thread that long, but a lot has been going on in real life.

Anyways, I did get the feeling that this was a little bit of a filler chapter. I know that every chapter doesn't have to contain a huge plot development, but I felt that this chapter was missing just a little something. Brienne's opening up a little could perhaps be developed more, along with the relationship between her and George. We only really know that there has been flirting (and obviously quite open flirting if others have noticed) through her conversation with the other girls.

However, the playfulness of the twins is something you have again portrayed. And all grammar, sentence structure etc seems fine.

Hope this helped, and again, I'm so sorry for the long wait :)

Author's Response: :) Hi! Thanks for the tips, and no worries about the wait, just receiving a review at any time is great! :D Thanks again!

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