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Review:HarrietHopkirk says:
This is your first songfic? Well very well done, then. I love the Harry and Ginny pairing, and their characterisations and their emotions were well done. Your writing style has potential - you've got a good variety of different sentences structures.

I noticed a couple of typos and punctuation/grammar errors: these can be easily straightened out by use of a beta. A beta can also give you tips of your writing style - especially concerning the pacing and flow of your story. It's a little haphazard here, but I'm sure it will get better with practice. also watch your formatting - it can disrupt the flow of the story as well!

I like the song you chose, it definitely works with the moment and your use of descriptions and imagery is very good.

Well done!

Author's Response: It is my first songfic and also the first story I put on the site. I had written a couple drabbles before, but this was my first real work. Typos I know I have, I'm terrible at finding those, trust spell check way too much, but thanks for the review and for your input!

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