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Review:Chaos Walking. says:
I like to think of myself as one of your biggest fans (I'm sure you have loads more). Now I was going through your lists of stories to see if ou had posted anything new - I tend to do that a lot. And then I see that this only has one review and I think to myself "You'd be a rubbish *big fan* if you didn't boot it up to atleast a 2" so here I am.

The first time I read this, you kind of left me speechless.It was that good. And you say that this is one of the first things you ever wrote - I am so jealous right now.

The whole idea of this story is really plausible. Everyone kept in character. The wayy Draco acted seems really. Draco-ish??. I can actually see Harry doing something like that. He's almost sort of self righteous. The only person that I seemed to have an issue with is Mr Weasley. I don't think he would ever act like that even to a Malfoy. He's just not that type of person (in my opinion). I'd suggest changing him so someone more like ... er... Aberforth or maybe... I dunno Mundungus?? I'm actually not sure as to who but definatley not Arthur (but then again what do I know - it is your story. If you want him there, keep him there)

Anyways I just want to tell you that you are a very talented person and that I love all your work, even if I only leave reviews occsionally. I'll try and review everything but I won't advise you to get your hopes up - I am a massive procrastinator.

10/10

-ChaosWalking.

P.S I'm looking forward to a new story to read *hint*hint*

Author's Response: Aww haha thank you, this was getting a bit lonely and review-less, wasn't it? It's had quite a lot of reads and favourites but I think people are just put off reviewing because it's quite a long piece... it, and I, appreciate your review very much xD

YAY thank you, I'm so glad Draco was Draco-ish (haha :P) because OOC!Draco is one of my biggest pet peeves. Ohhh I've just re-read that bit about Arthur and I think you're right. I wanted to include him because chances are he would play a fairly large role in the post-war wizarding world, and I intended him to come across as a little cold and disdainful but mainly because he was uncomfortable with the situation - after all, he's a father and one of his sons is the same age as Draco, so I'm sure he wouldn't exactly feel great about the fact he was locked up in Azkaban, no matter what he'd done, and so Arthur would perhaps, not knowing quite how to deal with the sitiuation, try to distance himself from it instead... That was my thought process anyway xP But yeah, I made him a bit... fierce? Harsh? Either way, I'll look into it and thanks very much for the suggestions :)

Thank you! Again! I absolutely love any reviews I get but yours are always just so wonderful and never fail to put a ridiculously huge smile on my face, so thank you :)

(A new story? Hmmm I'll have to see about that... watch this space... *looks mysterious*)


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