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Review:Ali4077 says:
Hello!! Great and very sad story, this is me WolfieAli from the forums by the way finally getting onto one of these reviews I owe you :D

Anyway this was really well written and you really got right into Scorpius' emotions. I loved how he didn't fall for some other girl even when he was drunk, he just kept thinking about her.

I also loved the line "I can't live without her; she's my drug." It said a lot I think :)

I really liked how you got him drunkenly shouting his love for her at random passers by. It really does emphasise what he feels for her and makes you as a ready feel terrible for him.. or it did me anyway. You did a brilliant job describing that.

I love ScoRose but I still loved the story even if I wanted to shout at the girl to take him back at the end :D That bit when he realises finally it really is over is so sad.. but brilliantly written all the same.

Great job! I have no faults with it.. unless I've missed something but I loved it even if I normally tend to go for lighter ScoRose :D Thanks for bringing my attention to it x

Author's Response: Hey! Thanks for reviewing :)

I'm glad you liked it so much, you didn't find any faults! :D The ending is very sad and I wish it didn't have to end that way. I hate seeing Scorpius so upset.

Thanks again!

-Sophia x

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