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Review:slytherangoddess says:
Wow. I love the sensory imagry that you convey in this fic. I think what really makes it relatable and physical for the reader is the symmetry between each of the first 4 paragraphs. With each one you name one of the 5 senses (minus taste cuz that would be gross lol ) and that really helps me as the reader focus on that portion of the body. With the smells and sounds i could actually imagine what the smells and sounds would be like because of the level of detail...
It was great that you could portray such amazing detail in only 500 words and I commend you emmensely for that :D

~*~Sly~*~

Author's Response: This was the result of a caffeine-induced 2-in-the-morning writing spree, and for all that I am glad of its result. :P I agree - not much to taste, except for salt air and... bile? Blegh. There is only 500 words in which to convey things, and taste, I feel, was duly left out! :D

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