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Review:ND says:
I don't know what is the end. I still have to read it but I absolutely don't like the way your story is taking shape. There are a lot of flaws. Harry can not be so arrogant even if he has a lot of new powers. He will never talk to Albus so badly. This is an insult to the original Albus' character. I am very disappointed. Secondly, there is too much romance. Soul-mate, my girl, your girl, babes and shit. Keep it all to a minimum. The plot is really very good but I suggest that you edit your story. Because you have a good imagination. Very good actually. Learn how to play with words. All the best. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and I do appreciate your comments. Love Before Death and Life After Evil do have many many flaws, as do my later stories. However they were the original works. I found myself reading over a few chapters not long ago and found myself almost cringing!

I think the plots on them are strong, but naturally the writing style and flow of the story lacked somewhat.

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