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Review:RonsGirlFriday says:
I am drooling, Celeste, over your beautiful use of words.

She had a softer, sweeter voice than he'd presumed and stardust in her eyes. The nights in the dungeon had given her a parched rasp like a cut of the wind, but in reality, she sounded like silence.

Dean hadn't known her. Not really, not much, and never enough.

One step to the left or one look away or one moment where Luna didn't and Dean didn't and so they didn't become.

I love the not-really-but-maybe thing going on here with this pairing. I won't call it a ship, because it's not. This one-shot is so touching and poignant because, as you put it, they weren't even really friends - they were two people thrown together in a terrible time, who just shared each other's company and drew some hope from it.

Luna, while slightly a nutjob, has such a purity and innocence about her character that it's wonderful to see other characters reacting to her, not in the typical judgmental way, and drawing hope from her.

This is so wonderful. I adored this chapter.


Author's Response: I am drooling, Melanie, over this gorgeous review. But your reviews tend to do that to me just in general. ;)

They're not a ship, but I like telling myself that they could have been, though that likely wouldn't have worked out. Dean/Luna have had chemistry since DH for me. And Luna, while still the nutjob, has always been lovable to me, so hopefully she came off that way again. :D

ILY and thank you for the amazing review!

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