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Review:ravenclaw_princess says:
Well done. I thought this was a nice song fic and you used the song really well to guide the story. I love your use of descriptions an metaphors. They worked really well to create the scene and the mood. It really suited this moment really well and I could just imagine Ginny having a minor break down on her own.

You have a really nice writing style and the sentences just flowed together effortles, it was such a joy to read. This was one of my favourtie lines "But even sleep gave her no reprieve from her desperation. For no sooner had her eyes closed, than had Harry’s slender frame walked into her consciousness."

There were a few speling and grammar issues, such as missing capitals, wrong punctuation etc, but this can be fised with a beata reader. I would also close up the formatting a little so there are less spaces between the lyrics and the story.

Over all though, well done. I really enjoyed it.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! Editing the story has jumped to the top of my priority list, but I'm glad it flows well, because I was super worried about that!

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