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Review:ericajen says:
Ooh, this was pretty. I really liked the mixture of first and second person narrative in it. I've written a one-shot using first and second before (ironically a Dominique/Scorpius/Rose), and I think it can be a great device for writing. It really makes it interesting.

All of the imagery in this was so beautiful. I mean, the whole thing was like artwork. Which works so well because they're painting in it. I really liked that about it. How the writing reflected the story so well. That was great.

Also, in my mind, Scorpius was the painter and Dominique the painted. I'm not sure why. That's just where my mind went automatically. I didn't even think about it until I got to the author's note and you asked who we thought was who.

Great one-shot! :)

Author's Response: Thanks Erica!

Scorminique is a treasure, I'll tell you! And nobody really likes it when I go out on my Scorminique raves, because ScoRose is so popular and all, but I'm glad I have a Scorminique supporter in the fray!

Thank you so much for the review and the lovely feedback! :)

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