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Review:MajiKat says:
hey darling! thank you so much for entering the challenge and for capturing the spirit of what i was looking for!

this was a fabulous piece and you did a wonderful job with a character we know next to nothing about. you gave Goyle character - a history, emotion, dreams and goals and through all that, this dull sort of acceptance of his lot in life. what really clinched this for me was the last four paragraphs, where he talks about harry. there was a real fable-like quality to those lines and i love that moment of insight, where he sees hope for the future when he is at the end.

i also loved that he cared for his son. so often in fics about death eaters or pure bloods we see this detachment from family, or more so, from the emotion that comes with having a family. you didn't shy away from that - you made Goyle human, a father, a person and you did it wonderfully.

this was filled with regret - very well done because i think it is an emotion hard to capture without shoving it down peoples throats. you did it subtly, and i loved that!

thank you once again for taking part!!
Kate xx

Author's Response: Thank you so much! :) I had so much fun writing this - unlike anything I've ever tried before. Having a character that was unknown was a little daunting, but I loved being able to create his story! I always thought that all Death Eaters couldn't be completely horrible people - I expected some were actually really nice fathers who genuinely felt some love. I'm really glad you liked it and thanks for the opportunity to participate! :)

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