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Review:Badger says:
Hey! Sorry for being so extremely late. Anyways. I adore your banner. :) And it was adorable. A perfect shout-out to the lost Weasley twin!

Characterisation: Good! I got a fairly good feel for the characters even though it was only a one-shot. I couldn't really pick up on a really distinct POV though. Obviously it was in third person, but usually the reader can kind of get inside one character's head. The dialogue was fantastic and it really personified the character, but perhaps you could have made a more distinct main character and made it a little longer and developed the characters a bit more?

Flow: Great! It wasn't too fast or too slow; it was pretty perfect. It made the reader want to continue, as it was moving quickly, but not so fast that it left me confused.

Plot: I'm not so good with one-shots, as I fail at writing anything but novels, but the plot was rather adorable. Who misses Gred and Forge? :raises hand:

Technical: Spelling, grammar, punctuation...brilliant! I didn't notice anything wrong (so if there was anything, it was extremely minor.)

Sorry for writing such a short review! If you need more advice, just PM me and we can go over it in more detail. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. What do you mean, a short review?? It was brilliant! :D

I love the twins! Especially Fred ;) Thanks for your comments. I'll try to improve on the POV a bit.

-Sophia x


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