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Review:gingersnape says:
Hello again, I really liked this and thought the way you introduced all of the characters was really wonderful as they all seemed to need Andromeda as much as Andromeda need them, yet all of her boys were different! Julius had to be my favorite, and I liked how the boys didn't forgive her for calling him a "Mudblood" immediately after the incident, as it made it more realistic and highlighted how even Andromeda had people against her in the prejudiced world she was stuck in even though she was nice to people. Now that sounds obvious, but I think what I am saying is that Andromeda's supposedly at the top of everything and yet here she is a nice, albeit naive, person, and yet she still faces problems, so I really liked how everyone has their problems, but they all care deeply for each other by the end of it all. :)

I can't wait for more in Chapter 3,
-Annie

Author's Response: Thank you so much :)
I wasn't sure about having all the different flashbacks; it all replayed before my eyes, but would I be able to let readers see that too or would it be too confusing, jumping back to her schoolyears, and showing how she developped through the years in this way? I always thought she must have changed some, coming from a family like the Blacks, to go and marry a Muggleborn.
So thank you for saying that, it really means a lot! xxx Leo


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