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Review:Owlpost68 says:
aww, it was absolutely perfect :) I had been kind of wondering why Ted never wrote anyone while in France though. Maybe he really was busy, but given how close everyone is, I think letters would have been nice to add. There was maybe one spelling mistake in this one, but nothing urgent.
I'm not really sure the whole antidote thing from Narcissa was really needed, but I'm kinda glad it's there to make her slightly more tolerable than the others anyway. I think the poison could have only had one antidote, which was a kiss, and he could have just done that anyway.
All in all, I think it was great though :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing!
Ah, yes, that's a nice thought, but I had so much to include in the story as it was that I didn't really think about adding letters from Ted. Defintely worth a thought, though! And yes, I wanted to show that Narcissa hadn't completely shunned her sister, but rather was going along with the flow.
Thanks again for your input! xxx Leo

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