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Review:Ronsgirl29 says:
This story is just so heartbreaking! I'm torn between feeling horribly sorry for Adromeda and kind of hating her.

On the one hand, I feel like I'm literally watching her heart break through your words. Your description is just so vivid and real that I can't help but feel for her, and feel the sadness myself.

On the other hand, I resent her for how she treats Ted. It seems to me that he loves her, and they are married and have a child together, but she mopes around the house for another man. I understand that the heart wants what the heart wants, and she can't help who she loves, but then she should just end things with Ted. As much as it would have hurt her, (because she admitted she needed him) if she truly cared for him she shouldn't just drag him along.

I'm really impressed with how you're writing this in reverse order, I can't wait to read more and see how you pull this off!

-Ronsgirl29

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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