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Review:FrostyFannie says:
I like your story, a lot. The idea is plenty good, and if you keep writing like this, this could be a REALLY REALLY AWESOME story.


Though it would have been a lot better if you didn't put so much spaces: it made me dizzy. Well, that's maybe because it's midnight and I'm dying to sleep, but it would really be better because I bet there are others still on the computer at midnight, who would appreciate less spaces.

You could also maybe add more characters? It gets a little boring with only Ari and Caridee and Georgina talking. I'm 90% sure you'll enjoy writing conversations with more people in it: it's always fun to write the random bickering and the stupid statements. You'll also have more room to spread out.

I'm sorry if I bored you with this long review. Anyway, love your story!!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review! You should get some sleep! :) I'll trry to work out the spaces, it's probably my computer or something. :/ And the story will progress more

Thanks again. :)


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