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Review:Riya Potter says:
AAH! you are as bad as I am, for the cliffie.

well, the chap's nice, but you could improve a bit. You see, when you write down the conversation, as the one between McGonagal and James, either use direct speech or if you want to use reported speech, see that you write in the third person. Also, when you are writing a paragraph or a scene, the extra info in the brackets is fine but when you enclose anything between " " avoid using brackets, try to write it as if the speaker is adding on the info.

Well, you're story's really nice, and don't mind the instructions, I just thought of suggesting you with tips as a friend.

Update soon...

Keep writing... :)

Author's Response: No that's find my friend. How else is a person supposed to improve their story. It's comments like yours and others that really help. With my bad memory I hope I remember what you said. Again I'm glad your enjoying the story, and I'll try and update soon, I'm still awaiting the first chapter of a new story to go through validation, and then I'll be posting chapter 5 of daughter of Voldemort. I'm trying to get as many chapters through while the validation period is low.

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