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Review:seekers_destiny says:
No spectacular twists in this chapter but you did have a lot to catch up on. It will be interesting to learn more about the younger versions of the Weasley children. Harry should also end up being friends with them well before Hogwarts. I wonder if you have an explanation for the dream in store for us. I have included some errata for you in case you want to edit the chapter.

errata:
he pulled out a vile
he pulled out a vial

Not only did he loose two friends
Not only did he lose two friends

After Sirius had register he and Arthur
After Sirius had registered he and Arthur

we can say were going to visit him
we can say we're going to visit him

Author's Response: Thanks for pointing those out. I do tend to have a little trouble with them. Unfortunately the spell and grammar check don't always catch that stuff. I'll take a closer look at future chapters. Thanks for the review. I never thought to say more about the dream. My thought is that it was sent from above.

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