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Review:Capella Black says:
Heya! So this was really good. I love reading about the lesser known characters from JKR's world, and Slytherins in particular are always a fun read. Yours in particular was enjoyable as it had a proper plot to it - it's so easy in one shots to just go with a single theme, but yours had several, and they all weaved together really well.

I was a little surprised by McGonagall in this piece - given that she could see the work wasn't normal for Tracey, it would have seemed more in character for her to pull her aside quietly, and for someone to simply overhear and then tell everyone else. But that's just my two pence - either way, it was a great way to have her get noticed in all the wrong ways.

I love your Nott too - he's pretty much just how I always picture him, and hits that perfect level of sweet and believable. "Not to me. You were never unnoticed by me" - awww! Really nice.

So yeah, great piece - thanks for posting it!

Author's Response: o wow! i'm so glad you liked it! I wanted to write about someone not noticed in JKR's world and so i figured this would be a good person to do it on. I wasnt sure if i should use McGonagall as the person to point this out but the only other person i could see doing this is Snape but since she is Slytherin i couldnt see him pointing it out either. I'm so glad you enjoyed my plot and that you thought my characters were believeable and sweet! Thank you for reading and reviewing!

~Slytherinchica08~

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