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Review:mugglemania says:
Yippee!!! Another great chapter. I hate cliffhangers, though, so add the next chapter as soon as possible before I explode, wondering which house he'll get into.
Also, this chapter was much better length wise. Longer than the other short ones.
I've noticed something about the dialogue, though. It sounds a bit uptight and formal. Not too badly, though. In real life, people don't always say everything perfectly and formally. I always try to throw in a few "uh"s "um"s and slang in there, and maybe that would help.
Other than that, all I have to say is great job and update soon.
9.5/10

Author's Response: I suppose I am kind of formal in my writing now that you mention it. I'll go over it later and edit in a few uh's and um's and maybe a few wass up's as well. Thanks again for the great review and rating and the update will be going in tonight, since I first put this story on the HPFF site it has been very popular with nearly 1500 reads. So who I'm I to disapoint my readers. The latest addition to my Daughter of Voldemort story is short again, before you say anything I'm sorry.

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