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Review:Mintleaf says:
I know you said you weren't concerned with characterization but this line makes Harry seem exceedingly pompous: "But Ginís going to kill me if Iím late home again Ė and even if Voldemort couldnít pull that off, I reckon she could.Ē I think it's something about the way it's phrased!

I also think you've reintroduced Pansy in a believable way and form haha :) Good work!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for the review!

And thanks for pointing out that line. It sounds okay to me but if you think it's really OOC for Harry then I'll have another look at it. While I said I wasn't all that fussed, I don't want them to be too blatantly OOC because that would defeat the point of the challenge, woudln't it?

cheers, Mel

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