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Review:gingersnape says:
O Jayne, O Jayne, This was amazing!
I have always loved reading Neville (he's one of the few Hogwarts Era characters who I really like) and I think your Neville stands out to me. It was haunting, the way he interacted with his parents, and having Augusta walking with him in the beginning was really something, as I had never thought of how Neville would feel before going to see his parents. The end was beautiful, woith it's description of how Neville had mentally changed what the place where his parents stayed and had kept his memories of the two people he should have been able to look to for help and guidence to symbolize something that paralled his coming of age with his brithday. (Did you loose your place in that sentece, because I did, so I apologize if it came off as rather all over the place!) The gum wrapper in particular was something I loved because it just stood out as all Alice had, but it was enough to make Neville feel as though he had meant something to her. Maybe not a big something, but it was something enough.

Wonderful, wonderful story, and I look forward to reading more of your AMAZING writing as I continue attacking your page! :D
-Annie

Author's Response: YAY! Thank you so much, Annie! I am really glad you enjoyed it - it was my first time writing Neville, so I am glad it came across well. :)

Love you!!!

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