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Review:Akussa says:
Hello Dearest,

I really enjoyed this story; from the choice of characters to the choice of setting and prose, loved it!

I loved the ambiguity you set up as to who the main character is in this story (at first, I mean); gives a strange edge to the narration. The characterization of Blaize and Pansy was very well done. I love that you gave Pansy a second level where she isn't simply Draco's fangirl.

The emotional level of Blaise was very well done. It felt very real for him to feel that way and also very, erm, masculine of him not to want to talk about it or admit it outloud.

Overall, I greatly enjoyed reading this; your story flows very well and is different and realistic. Great job!

Akussa

Author's Response: Ooh, yay! I'm so glad that the ambiguity seemed deliberate to you - I wasn't sure it came across that way, but it was definitely supposed to. And it's nice to hear that you liked my Pansy and Blaise - I wanted him to be unique and different from the standard Slytherin type, while still fitting the group as a whole. And Pansy obviously had to be a little dark for the concept to work, but she also had to have enough redeeming qualities for Blaise to like her this much!

Anyways, thanks so much for reading and reviewing this, and for all the support!


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