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Review:Ginny45 says:
Hello! RandomRed here.

I really enjoyed this, you did it really well and they seemed in character. There were some amazing moments. The bit about the deatheaters charming simple objects made me laugh and it was such a good detail.

I did notice a couple of things but one is just s typo. :)

"Muggl-eborns" - Typo.

"He had to admit life could be much worse than it was. Admittedly" - This could be just me but the word admit twice in close proximity sounds weird.

Stop doubting yourself! I just saw the reply you made on you status. This was really good and the Yaxbridge made it unique and I adore unique!

I really like the resentment towards Snape, it is believeable. Everything is remarkably canon as well, which I wasn't expecting. I was expecting a bit more twisting of the timeline but you did it well.

I have already said this, I think. But when you think about it they are so alike, it is insane. You picked up on something there Wolfie!

Anyway, I shall post this review now and go back to attacking you page. :) I am sad it isn't on a lampost but alas I will survive.

Ginny45/RandomRed xxx

Author's Response: THANK YOU!
May I just say... best review ever :D I tried so hard to make this canonically correct even though it is Yaxbridge.. which isn't canon even though it should be but other than that I was desperate to just make this real.

I hate Snape.. I really dislike him and I figured Yaxley would see him as a rival so I thought.. why not! :D Glad you found it believable as most of this I wasn't sure on.

This review... made my year :D xxx


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