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Review:Mintleaf says:
This was a completely gorgeous bit of writing! Normally the present tense puts me off but you've somehow pulled it off here! The whole thing was written beautifully and was very believable. Your symbolism and use of literary devices was perfect! The only criticism I have is that this line doesn't seem to fit at all, 'She imagines they would taste of citrus fruits and champagne...' the rest of the story seems very mature, but this line just sounds so childish. But that's seriously the only bad word I have against this story! Great work! :)

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you very much for taking the time to leave a review. Present tense is strange, but it can be very effective, especially when better writers than me use it, but I'm glad you like this all the same. Thanks for the feedback too - I understand what you mean, and though this was written a while ago, if I ever edit it I will look for inconsistancies in the tone. Thank you very much for your lovely review xx

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