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Review:Mintleaf says:
'All things that begin begin before...' I think there may possibly be the need for a comma between the two 'begin's but I'm not one hundred percent sure to be honest haha. The opening paragraph sort of made me chuckle a bit. I had to read it several times over and it reminded me of Dr Seuss. Haha, but I think that's what you intended anyway! :)

'She wanted to be free and soar down with no regards to beginnings or ends, but only middles.' this is a beautiful sentence! :)

'the words rolled off her nose sweetly, but coldly.' they rolled off her nose?

'A day filled with lunch in a care' cafe?

This was a very pretty piece of writing! The contrast between the two, especially in their initial description, seems very good indeed! I liked the way it flowed and the air of mystery it had about it! Good work! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Tilly for the review, and I think it's high time to go fix those! I'm glad you pointed them out, as I've tried to go through this a few times, but never caught those errors! Thanks for the review,
Annie


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